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Muse Waxing

My mind splayed
As un-private pools  
Drifting full of littered life bits
Turned upward toward the sun, to develop naturally
Then evaporating back into my head as new thoughts, waiting for a finer point.

entered in Matt Caliri's Contest "The Contest of New Terrains"

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  1. Date: 10/11/2009 10:51:00 PM
    Wonderful piece, Sandra! Hope to see you back on the Soup soon! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 11:50:00 AM
    Witty job, I trust you are in school and busy now, I start 8-17-09, myself. Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 1:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this contest.

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 12:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Sandra.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 2:06:00 PM
    Hey! Sandra, 3rd place in Matt's contest! Congratulations. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 1:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your high win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 8:11:00 AM
    Congratulations, Sandra!! A well deserved winning poem!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 6:37:00 AM
    Sandra, congratulations on 3rd place! I really like the images in the poem as well as the form. You did a great job. Krista

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 5:11:00 AM
    Contratulations, Sandra, for winning 3nd place in the New Terrains Contest. It is a well deserved win. Sincerely, Dane Smith-Johnsen

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 11:18:00 PM
    Sandra congrats on placing third in Matt's contest - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 10:19:00 PM
    Well done, congratulations! Trudy

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 9:10:00 PM
    Congrats on your placement! Definitely great since this is your first of writing this form C:

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 2:58:00 PM
    (part two) just then the clouds moved away and the moon was full. her friend gave a growl and fell down on all fours. jhl

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 2:57:00 PM
    (part one) A woman looked in the palm of her hand and strangly saw a pentagram. at first she thought it was dirt. but when she tried to wash it off, no soap would work. she asked a freind, a familar face. what's the meaning of this abnormality? her friend with a look of shock; said "get that disease away from me!" latter that evening she went to his house demanding an apology why was he such a louse.he said to her a pentagram is a sign for the victom of a werewolf.

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 2:46:00 PM
    heyy!! MAIL!

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 4:20:00 PM
    Sandra,..great write ! Ty for your comment ! james

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 11:50:00 AM
    You sure can wax lyrically , Aa . Great piece and best of luck in the contest ..

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 11:22:00 AM
    Wonderful writing. I fee the same way. I always go back and say I can do better than that. Love it. Sara

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 10:53:00 AM
    Spectacular! Sandra! I'm makin' a call here!....... another 1st. prize finish! for Sandra!!!!