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murder in game house

The moment the deed was done
I knew it was all a sham
The hidden guilt in their eyes
Threaten to betray their deepest lies
Now I wonder who
Took the soul of this cadaver

It all seems far too right
And yet something is wrong
The stories fit together
No change in perception or language
Like a game they choose to play
Fool me and take the crown

Who created this fiasco
Set the scene into play
With late nights and clues
It’s all falling into place
Run far as you can
I’ll catch you later on

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:33:00 AM
    Hi Comfort, this is very clever poem it leaves me thinking what it all means, this is the first poem I have read but you have a flair for story writing. all the best to you. John

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Hi Comfort i like this very intriging rhyme , thanks for your word on boiled eggs, all the best Owen