Ms Rain

We have been friends for many a year, and been through much pain, but we have continued on strong, you and I Ms. Rain.  Our friendship is a special one, something I would not lose.  No matter what I could be told, those who would spit out their views, I can not deny the truth within my heart, how exactly it is I feel because in the end I have fallen for you, you are my Achilles heel.

    Beheld in my eyes you shine as bright as the sun, so vibrant in its place. I look upon you, and I can not help it, I smile every time I see your face.  Your eyes speak silent words, words filled with so much joy, but you needn't say a word, I hope to one day be your boy.

    In a time of sorrow where I felt without life, you rescued me from the dark. I felt a purpose once again, I felt life flow back into my heart.  You deserve much more than that which you have been given, for that there is no doubt, and even though this world is cruel, and sometimes so utterly dark, do not fret nor do not pout.

    We continue to move on forward, and we shall never stop. There may be times that seem unmeasurable, times where we seem to drop, but with you I feel anything is possible, and with you I hope to advance. Nothing feels more certain, yet all I need is but a chance. Your smile brings a joy to my heart, a joy which others could only hope to attain, I hope one day that I can do the same, bring this joy to you Ms. Rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/29/2011 1:33:00 PM
Awesomely written!
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