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Mr Rock and Roll

Here comes Mr rock and roll who thinks its cool to be alone I wonder if he thinks the same Seven years to the day. Walking down the street again trying to find some friends to see wondering why No body interesting in you today. When that day comes around The words in your head will agree Why did this happen to me? People used to love me, Then you'll wish that maybe you Were kind to those broken hearts Maybe you wouldn't be alone Just staring at your silent phone. Here comes Mr rock and roll Another day spent on his own Staring down at his phone Poor Mr rock roll all alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/30/2010 6:57:00 AM
Hi Crystal. I was delighted and honoured to be placed in your contest. A sincere thanks from one who is fairly new to writing and still finding my feet. Mr rock and roll is so true. Back in the day we had them, all hair and cool. Its fun to see them now, the cool gone the same way as the hair.Clever write that works on two levels, back then and today. Thanks again and sleep softly and in peace in 2011. Eamon
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:34:00 PM
Also, rock and roll is just not rock and roll anymore. So I am looking at it symbolically as well. This was a really interesting read, Crystal. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:12:00 PM
Knew a few of my own Crystal.. nicely penned and with such vibrancy too.. enjoyed with luv.. and thankxx for the wonderful contest and placing me 7th ... appreciate the luv..luv..
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:05:00 PM
Really good write and a great message. enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 12/29/2010 3:44:00 PM
Crystal...your insight is a valuable tool in your creativity! keep it up! great work!.....jimbo
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