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For P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week Contest"
Written:July 2012
By: Carol Brown
1st Place Winner

Mountains Touch the Sky

as one with the clouds
enfold within still layers...
mountains touch the sky

naturehaiku

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Akolade Adewunmi

Date: 8/9/2013 7:18:00 AM

Wish we can work together, get to contact me on akoladeadewunmi@gmail.com

Akolade Adewunmi

Date: 8/9/2013 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for your encouragement, i wish you all the best. Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:38:00 PM

Yes, a rocking win for my contest... i like the peak in the clouds...pd

Chokri Omri

Date: 11/15/2012 11:30:00 AM

The Rainy Mountain On the top of it and down to the river The rain drops are carefully falling. Around, everything looks up in wonder The mountain too but always up amazing Never has it looked down, before, now or after. The mountain is always up and patient And people feel pride after climbing. Little do they know the way to it is eminent! But who wants to pay heed? Who cares? The sun does not set but hides behind it. And as you see! The clouds meet and kiss the head of it. Take this then from time both ancient and modern: During wind and rain, The mountain is patient. During love and hatred, The mountain is patient. But when it gets angry, Please forgive and forget. Chokri Omri

Len Gasun

Date: 8/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

I've dropped by in your winning piece and what a beautiful scenery painted in here. Belated congratulations my dear Carol. I just came from a choir practice in the church and just have read your message now. Have a beautiful and grace-filled weekend, too, Carol! luv, leonora

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/18/2012 5:24:00 AM

congratulations on first place win,,,,,, blessings of the day Carol ;}

Jim Pemberton

Date: 7/16/2012 6:25:00 AM

Just stopping by to say thanks for your thoughts and inspiring words! Have a great and fantastic day! Blessing in all that you do! JP

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/13/2012 1:03:00 PM

First place, WOW!!! I know this made your day as it was a very competitive contest, Carol,,,when I read this haiku I am breathing more relaxed as I meld with nature,,,,great work!...Also wanted to say thanks for the placement in your contest...For me it was special bc typically the judges aren't familiar with all the landmarks I write about---not the case for you with my bicycle poem about the places I traveled in our home state. Thanks again, Carol...Hope your summer is off to a great start. Been a little immobilized with the heat..

Daver Austin

Date: 7/13/2012 11:27:00 AM

Dreamy one, Carol. Congrats on the win. Love, daver

Erich Goller

Date: 7/13/2012 8:33:00 AM

beautiful Haiku, thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/13/2012 8:02:00 AM

This is a gem, Carol. Thank you so much for all your encouragement. love, Kathy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2012 5:21:00 AM

congrats Carol on a fantastic first place for this marvelous write my friend.. truly lovely as are all your sweet comments to me too.. am still dealing with head pain and on meds now.. so hubby has comment duty once again.. so appreciate your words which lift and encourage always luv..

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2012 5:12:00 AM

congrats on your win Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2012 12:45:00 AM

Happy to see this do so well for you. Congrats to you, CArol.

Amy Kramer

Date: 7/12/2012 10:14:00 PM

I also enjoy reading your poetry, Carol. You write beautifully! Amazing how such a short poem can bring me to such a lovely place. Congrats on 1st place! Well-deserved! :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/12/2012 8:19:00 PM

Simply beautiful - congratulations.

Tricia Aizpuru

Date: 7/12/2012 6:11:00 PM

wow,well that's very nice...=)

Courtney Courtney

Date: 7/12/2012 5:25:00 PM

very good Haiku, I have a question in a Haiku contest can you enter a poem consisting of three haikus?

Terry O'Leary

Date: 7/12/2012 3:41:00 PM

Very nice Haiku... Terry

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/12/2012 2:25:00 PM

Haiku as good as this gets a lot of recognition around here. Great write Carol.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/12/2012 12:15:00 PM

Hey Carol, congratulations on your win in the contest.. I enjoyed this tonight.. Hope your week has been a good one thus far and thank you for your encouragement always.. Love Wilma

Archontoula Alexandropoulou

Date: 7/12/2012 9:54:00 AM

Dear Carol, Thank you for your warm welcome, and wishes. My love for haiku enticed me to read yours. It certainly evokes to the eye the watercolour-like scenery and emotion lying in a haikuist's soul. pyrgia

Marty Owens

Date: 7/12/2012 9:52:00 AM

Carol, Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed reading...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 7:52:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one today..I don't know how I have missed it..Congratulations on your great win...Thanks for stopping by, your comments are always uplifting..Sara