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Mountain Scene

MOUNTAIN SCENE In a distant cleft Inaccessible In that shadow region Too steep Even for mountain sheep That’s where I now mentally wonder Where I wander Deep beneath the glacial flow Where many an age ago Some thin-skinned tropic beast Perished in the slow advancing snow Now the sculpted peaks surround Like tomb markers that sky Overlie that time so long gone by And the valley copse of shrubbery The boulders from one of which I spy This awesome grandeur Blithely push and weigh A virgin landscape’s hopeful, bright new day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/7/2012 6:37:00 PM
I really like the involvement of time, here...and then seeing it as timeless, as well. Clever!
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:26:00 PM
Soup mail Daver!!
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Date: 7/28/2012 6:41:00 PM
have to come back here and fave this beauty!
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Date: 7/28/2012 6:49:00 AM
pure splendor from your polished pen, daver.. fine poetic landscape!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/27/2012 3:52:00 PM
You've got me wandering and wondering with you here Daver; I'll get Mikkie to check out the nearer of our neighbouring crags L O L)) and I'll let you know I there's anything similar out there!!
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Date: 7/27/2012 10:29:00 AM
A beautiful scene, Daver! Feels quiet and serene, I suppose the most accessible way there, would be by way of the mind.:) We are not "mountain sheep...too steep" anyhow, but this feels to be a bird's eye view. Best wishes! Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:00:00 PM
MAGNIFICENT, my friend, as I already told you. I love this one from you.
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