Mountain Maiden

Desolate near a mountain top,a maiden sighing high;
While floating gently above the ground,
Clouds went tiptoeing softly by.
Beside this sierra tall and steep,
Yonder where the insects creep;
This angels eyes now beckoned:
I clambered up the slippery side,
Not waiting for one second.
A confetti of butterflies,were making way on wing;
The maiden now opened her eyes,when a lark began to sing.
Beneath some trees,the rustling leaves;
Were conferencing just in murmur,
This heart began to pound so fast,it seemed so full of fervour.
Now stars came out and brightly shone,
They danced along my way;
My woman now with song and dance,
Had woken out of slumber;
A sign to mean the time had come,
To know we're two in number.
I smiled upon that lovely face,
So full of joy and feminine grace.
We made love now,like two so skilled;
A night it was with pleasure filled.

                                                    --- Princefreakasso
                                                        (Artist and Poet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/9/2015 3:56:00 PM
Poetry of Passion & Sublime..Amazingly Suburb..Blessings Princess Laurice
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:50:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Prince. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2009 11:19:00 AM
I just felt like I was living it.Nicely written.
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Date: 11/7/2009 11:28:00 PM
Ooooh Prince ! ... The Brush of Thy Lips Did Speak and Paint This Picture, Mesmerizingly Sweet !... This awesomely, beautiful poem is going into my fav's... Romantic, Charismatic, Passionate... Loved Every Word ... MoonBee
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:48:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:29:00 PM
so sweet ,beautiful write--Charma
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Date: 10/27/2009 8:35:00 AM
WOW! Beautiful poetry, great imagery through the lines. A real jem of a work of the pen!. Thank you for sharing and thank you for the comments on my poem, "God's Rich Garden". Caroline.
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Date: 10/27/2009 7:11:00 AM
Prince, this is a ~~~Magnificent~~~ write. Thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed reading it as I do all your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2009 3:55:00 AM
Interesting passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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