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Mother Nature and Old Father Time

Mother Nature met Old Father Time, and what a good time they had They cavorted for quite along while, she a girl, him a bit of a lad. Then one day when Father Time, a wrinkle set in mother natures plan All those things she gave birth too, he decided he's not a fan. The renewal of all things good, Mother Nature sent our way Father time lets them flourish, and then sends them on their way. Mother Nature keeps giving birth, a wondrous mother she proves to be But Old Father Time throws his tantrums, he tries to be the boss of she. So the mother and father that we all know are still battling day by day But let’s let them get on with it, and try not to get in either ones way. © ~GG~ 07’03’2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2013 8:09:00 AM
A poem marked by ingenuity Mandy- Mother Nature and Father Time, cleverly done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/8/2013 4:36:00 PM
Mandy, this is an extremely clever poem, you defy the safety net, that one adheres to, and create the most amazing poetry.. what ever the subject, you enlighten us all with wondrous words of pure logic, and magical mysticism
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Date: 3/7/2013 5:51:00 PM
This is such a joy to read Mandy and so clever! Wow..thank you for your kind remarks as well
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:05:00 PM
this is a really fun personification poem, Mandy. I much enjoyed. About the flippers. I didn't know how to get it across in only ten syllables, but when I was on a cruise, we wore flippers when we went into the ocean to dive. That is part of the cruise package, well at least on ours it was!!
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:41:00 PM
ha Mandy loved this gem...David
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:14:00 PM
I got a chuckle at this one..Very creative and expressive work..I am glad that I chose it today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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