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Moth

A glimpse, a flash of red. Strands that catch the light. Smoldering, enticing - A moth doomed to ignite. And suddenly he's back - Familiar twist and knot. A touch, a whispered word, The scent of bergamot. And from the tainted ashes, Faint, persistent glow. She's just another face, Someone he used to know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2016 10:20:00 PM
Wanted more Moth, and learned a new orange word! Very nice.... ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:17:00 AM
dang, girl, I am just clicking in circles!! this was a great one I "landed" on though I had seen it before.
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Date: 4/9/2013 10:19:00 AM
Boo that dude! The way you used a moth in this one is sooo cool... it can't help being drawn by the light til' it gets burned...great metaphor...but I wonder if moths learn from their mistakes?hehe...I know I don't.
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:49:00 PM
wowowow, what imagery!!! love this one.
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Date: 11/22/2012 9:50:00 PM
Why are women attracted to the wrong guys??? I really enjoyed your poem. I hope you have not been burnt.
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:04:00 PM
Beautiful written Heather (we fight for true love) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise :)

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