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Mossy Tunnel ~Haiku

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Mossy Tunnel ~Haiku

Dark mossy tunnel
Babbling brook streams under 
Moist air surrounds dew

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  1. Date: 4/13/2009 11:20:00 AM
    I can really feel this! jim

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 12:55:00 AM
    Cool work here Jane.Nic one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments.

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 1:33:00 PM
    i can picture the scene and the coolness of the stream. john

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 10:36:00 PM
    the image is so darkening! yet the haiku is just brilliantly put together! lovely write! ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 5:30:00 PM
    this a indeed a beauty...nicely done!..Maryam*

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 5:21:00 PM
    Good use of imagery! Love the opening line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 4:09:00 PM
    It is like I am there. I would be on the look out for strange creatures. Love the feel of this atmosphere. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 3:04:00 PM
    An illustrated beauty...Raul

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 12:44:00 PM
    compact and perfectly formed

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 12:31:00 PM
    A well-painted image, Jane!