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Mosaic: On Missing the Morning

She described the morning as misty, dewy, and delighted in its freshness. Drowsy from dreams her waking filled with, pastel clouds, bright flowers, breeze-filled trees, and joyous birdsong. She saw, felt, heard and smelt the wondrous day. 2. He described the morning as, too early -- don’t rouse him. Keep the curtains drawn and leave him slumber. Not for him the morning freshness, morning beauty or another dancing day. Tell the twittering birds to stop the noise -- just go away. He prefers descent into the sard of sleep to dream and dream again, the dreams of only sleep.

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Date: 6/5/2014 4:21:00 AM
Lovely descriptions and a great contrast of perspectives of the same "moment". The rich potential of the day, against the humdrum banality of everyday existance. Nice write!
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Date: 12/23/2013 7:59:00 AM
Love it. The contrast of life viewed through a poet's dreamy eyes, and the eyes of a practical realist. I will take the dreamy vision.
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Date: 12/19/2013 4:35:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, SuZ ! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and happy Christmas ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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