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Morningstar Visions (Part 12)

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Morningstar Visions (Part 12)

Botany dome cracks
Spoken fingertip softness
Bounce rational gap

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  1. Date: 11/3/2009 10:29:00 PM
    I like your "Botany dome cracks"! Great Haiku and chose of words. Thank you also for commenting "Wege, die sich nicht kreuzen". Do you also speak German? Keep your pen flowing! Saludos...Gert

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 11:03:00 PM
    "Botany dome"...a tree ? ... still thinking.....

  1. Date: 9/12/2009 12:47:00 PM
    The alliteration and imagery make this haiku, nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 5:59:00 PM
    Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. I like the alliteration. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 7:14:00 AM
    wonderful haiku.... keeep writing. you are great. Adeleke