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Morningstar Visions (Part 12)

Botany dome cracks Spoken fingertip softness Bounce rational gap

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/3/2009 10:29:00 PM

I like your "Botany dome cracks"! Great Haiku and chose of words. Thank you also for commenting "Wege, die sich nicht kreuzen". Do you also speak German? Keep your pen flowing! Saludos...Gert

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2009 12:47:00 PM

The alliteration and imagery make this haiku, nice work...Raul

Date: 9/11/2009 5:59:00 PM

Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. I like the alliteration. Keep on writing. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2009 4:35:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/11/2009 7:14:00 AM

wonderful haiku.... keeep writing. you are great. Adeleke