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Morning Walk

Dappled sunlight pathway The morning softly speaks Whispering of summer BlueJay's complaining notes Long ears in the brown grass Murmur of working bees Stride without intent Savoring quiet Gathering my strength Feeding on nature Hearing life's songfest Turning away From daily cares Breathing freely Mind wandering Memories Yesterdays Tomorrows Air Sweet Alone Walk

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/15/2012 10:29:00 PM

Beautiful. Really enjoyed this. Later.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/24/2012 11:00:00 AM

I am Now thinking whether you entered this excellent Hexaverse in the contest!It is surprising that this was not placed!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2012 8:08:00 PM

Hey, now this gem could do double time for ya. it could be in the summer contest and the form contest both!! Beautiful!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/17/2012 12:17:00 PM

Magical way of describing the animals and your carefree gait...glad I took this walk with you today, Barbara...refreshing! Oh, hey come over and see the contrasting difference between my diminished hexi from yours...A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge...Let's take this walk again tomorrow...About the same time?...lol. Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 6/17/2012 1:03:00 AM

The best I have read so far.Should top the chart.Excellent!!!