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Morning Walk

Dappled sunlight pathway
The morning softly speaks
Whispering of summer
BlueJay's complaining notes
Long ears in the brown grass
Murmur of working bees

Stride without intent
Savoring quiet
Gathering my strength
Feeding on nature
Hearing life's songfest

Turning away
From daily cares
Breathing  freely
Mind wandering


Air Sweet


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  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Beautiful. Really enjoyed this. Later.

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 6:58:00 AM
    That was an excellent hexaverse, loved the read.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:00:00 AM
    I am Now thinking whether you entered this excellent Hexaverse in the contest!It is surprising that this was not placed!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:08:00 PM
    Hey, now this gem could do double time for ya. it could be in the summer contest and the form contest both!! Beautiful!

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Magical way of describing the animals and your carefree gait...glad I took this walk with you today, Barbara...refreshing! Oh, hey come over and see the contrasting difference between my diminished hexi from yours...A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge...Let's take this walk again tomorrow...About the same time? Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 1:03:00 AM
    The best I have read so far.Should top the chart.Excellent!!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:33:00 PM
    Barbara, even alone is sweeter than sweet..always~pd

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 3:15:00 PM
    This is a wondrous write Barbara! I rather enjoyed this pleasant and delightful poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Peaceful morning walk, lovely poem Barbara. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 2:10:00 PM
    VERY nice diminished hexaverse! <3