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Morning On the Lake

As birds are singing in the nearby trees, The morning sun reflects upon the lake, Its warmth caresses, softly strokes my head, The reeds are blowing in the gentle breeze, No fish in sight: the water is opaque; So glad I’m here, instead of in my bed. Jack Horne, 28th October, for Nette’s Senses for a Sestet contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/6/2013 7:28:00 PM
Jack I love this pen it flows beautifully great imagery Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/10/2013 11:10:00 PM
This certainly fits your personality..to take her somewhere nice. congrats. I really enjoyed this. BG
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:11:00 AM
Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:58:00 PM
Lovely and very interesting piece,Jack..Congrats on your win,pal..
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:14:00 PM
You made her a merry soul! Very unique one, Jack and I think it is very lyrical and pretty. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:39:00 PM
Very nice, Jack... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:57:00 PM
Lovely description and write Jack. Hugs
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:42:00 PM
Love this poem. It's not often that I see the abcabc rhyme scheme. Very well written poem.
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:03:00 PM
A very lovely poem and entry Jack. Best to you in the contest.
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:58:00 PM
describes the photo well...beautiful write my friend :) good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/29/2013 6:57:00 PM
You wrote this with precision, a very perfected write! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem this evening! What a phenomenal piece, a river of pure bliss written by your words! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:05:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Seems that you wrote it with ease..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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