Morning Light

The gift of dawn I often fight, hiding from the morning light
which silently slips beneath the darkest shades contrite.

Raising my lashes, caressing my cheek, warm on silken sheets,
a divine stretch arches my back, as the morning light I greet.

Footfall meet a sheepskin rug which cushions arch and searching toes,
arms over head, I stretch again, and find a blue terry-cloth robe.

Down miss matched stairs I tread with care to the purr of Smokey cat,
tuna for him, tea for me, a friendly cuddle and a tete-a-tete.

Then out I go, onto the back porch, to an ancient wooden chair,
to welcome the day watching morning birds in the summer air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/1/2013 7:44:00 AM
a no 1 win. Well done cool lady xx
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:54:00 PM
Captivated by the serenity and detail from the morning awakening to the ancient chair. Beautiful and picturesque moments to the morning light. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 3:39:00 PM
wonderful write....congrats on your win
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:11:00 PM
such a pretty scenery, it slips deep in with light. Love the welcoming view. DG . Love the win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2013 3:06:00 AM
Congrats, Debbie! Keep it up! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:51:00 PM
congratulations D G... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2013 2:30:00 PM
It was so enjoyable to stretch, yawn, and greet the morning while reading your poem..... thanks for the warm summer morning!! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:22:00 AM
It is a wonderful time of day. Loved your poem Debbie.
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:07:00 AM
This should have been a top poem....goes waaaaayy beyond my own!!! Hmmmmm????
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:03:00 PM
Oh, how lovely! This sounds like my former life, before Monkey-girl, cat and all. I am thinking about writing for this 'test but if I stay true to what my mornings are like, it will a negative image to yours! LOL! I occasionally get 5 mins to myself-- and THAT is bliss. Now, back to you. LOVE LOVE LOVE your rhyme scheme, its sophisticaiton. I DO hope this places way up there. :-( You made me miss my plump kitty who thought herself a lap dog and whose purr drowned out the garbage truck Soupmail
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:55:00 AM
So lovely morning and beautiful poem Debbie. - Have a nice weekend in sunshine. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:16:00 AM
Great flow and rhythm..Winner for sure..Out on the porch for inspiration..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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Date: 8/10/2012 8:16:00 PM
Love the catchy phrases and the free-flowing form!
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