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Morning Dawn

Sedoka... 5-7-7-5-7-7 morning marinate merge in lost meditation losing all irritation absorb, marinate line up on new principle marinate in new precept of morning session evaluate marinate accept life’s renewed menu bind the old concept leave concepts of strife behind enter dawn of a new day as in eagle’s flight I have mitigated wings unlimited potential power essential infinite infinity I advance in destiny =========== In Honor of Nette And contest: In 24 hours By John Moses Freeman

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2011 9:00:00 AM

Lovely write, John - and another form I've never tried before. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

James Fraser

Date: 10/15/2011 10:41:00 AM

I love the wisdom in your words John, fine poetry my friend. Most deserved of it's win. Have a lovely weekend :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/15/2011 8:07:00 AM

This day u have painted is full of soooo much potential...so much optimism....wouldn't it be awesome if everyone felt the way this poem describes the opportunity of a new day? Congrats poet, on this great win! Gwendolen

Journey Mcknight

Date: 10/12/2011 1:59:00 PM

"infinite infinity" , that is my favorite line, thanks for sharing this, neverending, neverendin verse :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2011 1:46:00 AM

oh, and I see congratulations are in order. Way to GO!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2011 1:45:00 AM

YOu are my opposite, the early dawn!! And full of nature. Wonderful one john.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2011 6:35:00 PM

champion, moe.. SOUP MAIL!!

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/9/2011 4:37:00 PM

wow, John, like this one lots. That last stanza specially packed with fine one liners "mitigated wings" bein' my particular fave. Grats on the place in nette's 'test. Oh, and not fond of granola, are ya? Does that mean you eschew tofu, too? Just guessin' Happy eve, namaste~N

John Freeman
Date: 10/9/2011 4:55:00 PM

I like food in general Nancy, thats why I'm on diet two thirds of the time. Smile. Frosted mini wheats and flakes. Chinese food yum, yum. "get autta da way me sweet tooth tuday!"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/9/2011 11:48:00 AM

Thank you John for your nice comments. I am not able to enter your contest at this time. I usually enjoy the limerick style but I have been going through the trial of my brother's terminal illness and his death yesterday so can find no hilarity to write about. Next time. Love, Joyce

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/9/2011 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations John A well deserved win cheers Margaret

Fabiyas M V

Date: 10/8/2011 9:54:00 PM

Great work, John.Congratulations on your big win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2011 2:35:00 PM

Congrats Moses on a dynamic win with grandiose poetry so wonderful my friend..enjoy with luv.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/8/2011 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on a great win, John. Love, Joyce

James Fraser

Date: 10/8/2011 9:59:00 AM

Wonderful poetry John, the way it should be written. A most enjoyable read. Have a lovely weekend :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/8/2011 9:00:00 AM

a thoughtful write ripe with potential. Congrad's Light & Love

Dalila Agtani

Date: 10/7/2011 11:50:00 PM

Sedoka 577577 I like that line when you said "Unlimited Potential" Your nice comments are heart warming John. I enjoyed counting your sedoka! Dalila

Dana Smith

Date: 10/6/2011 6:52:00 PM

very wise and insightful, not to mention thought provoking.. enjoyed a lot.. feel free to notify me when you have some more up if I don't find them on my own..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 3:49:00 PM

Words of wisdom written as only you can, John. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2011 3:12:00 PM

Reads like a winner..In eagle's flight with the Holy Spirit's power under my wings, I can do anything..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Red Fiery

Date: 10/6/2011 2:25:00 PM

Oh ! 4got again ...vote ...77777777777

Red Fiery

Date: 10/6/2011 2:24:00 PM

''I advance in destiny'' I liked this too John...liked ur spirit. Once again I wud like to raise my hands in ur favour...my vote goes for ya...brilliant write

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/5/2011 10:03:00 PM

like it muchly, john. marinade is the spice of lunch! (to say the least) Namaste~N