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Moonlit Tears

She gazed up at the full moon;
Tears in her eyes, she whispered,
“Come back soon,” to her missing
Astronaut husband.

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/7/2014 11:28:00 PM

Jack This is such a sweet and sad poem. A love waiting to be reconnected with a true sweetheart. Thank you for the nice comment on my Futures In Your Heart poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Jack. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2011 2:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this great one..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 5:19:00 PM

Congrats Jack on a super second place win my friend with delightful entertaining poetry as always luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2011 4:37:00 AM

Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2011 2:42:00 PM

oh shucks, what a sad write.... I could just imagine this, Jack-- very well said... you sure gave moonlit tears a different aspect here...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2011 11:53:00 AM

imagine this happens Jack with lovely flow of emotion luv.. and.. our space program is now ended in USA.. money cuts and all that..serene words ..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/20/2011 1:14:00 AM

That is such a sweet poem Jack!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/19/2011 10:28:00 AM

A whole tender story in four lines! Brilliant verse my friend.

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/18/2011 3:44:00 PM

This is a very touching write, my second time to comment on it I like it very much. Thank you my friend for your kind comments on my write alone, means much...with love....your friend...old Jack

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 2:10:00 PM

very tender piece her jack.... really lovely...thanks for sharing...smiles..chiquita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2011 9:35:00 AM

Sad...Made me want to cry..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Have you read any of the "Bible"?..Psalms are in the "Bible"..Many of them were written by Kind David..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2011 5:58:00 AM

oh, jack.. i do feel the sense of longing here.. a sturdy, lyrical piece with winning streaks! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2011 1:44:00 AM

oh, my, you really got a story out of the picture. I am seeing so many good ones tonight. I just have to hurry and try this one!

John Smith

Date: 9/18/2011 1:03:00 AM

Touching. Sad to say, but he missed the last shuttle. Maybe moon maidens can look after him. That will reassure her. Fine, heart warming write. Sorry, I am irreverent tonight.

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/17/2011 9:23:00 PM

Wonderful write my friend..touching the anxiety of the fear of losing one dear...with love....your friend old Jack

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/17/2011 8:30:00 PM

I agree, that is too far for me too. Imaginative verse with a hint of sadness Jack.