Moonlit Buffet

Moonlit Buffet
 
Is that laughter I hear
 floating about in the air
 or the cooing of the breeze
 as it teases the willow
 to dance with giggling glee
 before the sun sounds
 its final drum beat
 and night descends
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Inhale deeply…..
 drown peacefully
 with pleasure
 as the honeysuckle
 and wisteria share
 their sweet potent scent
 under cover of darkness
 beguiling the succulent
 to come and play
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The softest of whispers
 hear we now ……
 the hushed soothing
 sound in the darkness
 as the breeze
 gentles its breath
 and the spider spins
 another web with
 thoughts of prey
 dancing tautly,
 wrapped and served warm
 on her homemade
 moonlit tray
 
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By: Debra Squyres 5/22/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
Debra, beautiful poem, very dreamy. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:43:00 PM
Ahhh!! Great descripive poetic quality at the end..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:05:00 PM
I'm with Joyce lots of originality here! a fav too!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:03:00 PM
Oh this one should have been much higher Debra. I enjoyed it very much. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
Debra~i like your poem. Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:00:00 PM
Debra, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:02:00 PM
Let me set the table, said the spider to the bug. I don't care how many legs, you can even be a slug. The moons romantic glow is fine. To set the mood so I can dine. The Louisiana night is here. Won't you please come join me dear. I'm intoxicated with your words Debra. Have yourself a lovely night. :)
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:00:00 PM
Very cool. I see you have an affinity for nature like me!
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:42:00 PM
this piece inspires inner peace :)
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:33:00 PM
as the breeze gentles its breath. WOW. Another very good one for imagery, my friend.
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:21:00 PM
deb is beautiful, i don't how to even discribe it. Love it!!!! *smiles* Ron
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:48:00 PM
exhilarating tonality and mood, debra... all senses alive!..:) huggs!
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