Moon Child

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My cancer moon lover
The one that has been in my dreams 
Emotionally, I yearn to discover 
Never the sixth player on my team

My cancer moon lover
A fair enigma, mysteriously intriguing 
There are still traits I must uncover 
Can you hear the tune my heart is singing

My cancer moon lover
ever-changing moods can cause stress
Most times I have no answer 
Confusion, But I love you nonetheless 

My cancer moon lover
Stimulating and extremely alluring
Nobody else is above her
At times she needs reassuring 

My cancer moon lover
The sign of the crab
Insatiable, I am so lucky to have her
So full of life, colorful and never drab

 “Moon Child”, Cancer you are my lover
You have come along and changed my life
She is my cancer moon lover
Compatibility they say no, but I want you as my wife!

I love you with all my heart Kimberly Collison!!!!

Jared Pickett
4/11/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/14/2012 8:29:00 PM
hahaha. I have to laugh because I married a Cancer!!! his moon is in Scorpio so he is DOUBLE water. Meanwhile, I am a double EARTH. When I read our compatibility chart later on (we have nothing in common) it said, "Earth and water makes mud. It's all what you do with it." Tell me, you are not earth sign, are you? If so, you will have to work really hard on making mud pies!
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Date: 4/14/2012 12:11:00 PM
a super awesome writ4e my friend.. but then I think they all are luv.. oh..
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Date: 4/14/2012 12:10:00 PM
u are too kind ..kind sir.. so appreciate your sweet wordes.. so very true .. our poetry touches so many to inspire.. u being back inspires me luv.. hope to be reading more and more from u . .. so happy for u that all is terrific in yoour life now.. be positive always and good things have to happen.. happy weekend luv..
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Date: 4/11/2012 5:24:00 PM
Wow. This is profound. I enjoyed this entertaining read. Always, Laura
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