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Monster within

I have a monster within, can't you tell?
I feel this rage and my sanity fell.
How can you love me, you've seen it before?
But you always stay close, my heart it torn.

It's like I feel this blood lust urge.
All around me it begins to surge.
It takes me over, over quick.
And when I wake I feel sick.

All this red inside me becomes reallity.
As all these bodies lay around me.
I don't understand you, not at all.
I fear your blood too, will fall.

This monster within takes me over like a puppet.
It's like I'm on strings and I'm helpless to stop it.
My biggest fear happened because you wouldn't listen.
We had a big fight and my sanity went missin.

My tears mix with the blood on my face.
The blood on my lip leaves a metallic taste.
I'm sorry I failed you by committing this sin.
So I give myself up to the monster, the monster within.

Copyright © karly hasselbach

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:20:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:23:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Karly. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 4:01:00 PM
    nice one

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Well done Karyl, this was a good poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise