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monoku 1 - engraved

and on a small stone upon a lonely hill a single name engraved . . . For Singled Out Contest Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:54:00 AM
    You definitely have a way with words, painting a lonely scene so well.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Nicely done with this monoku.love phyl

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:16:00 AM
    aww...you paint a sad picture of a neglected headstone... or rock as i read it again. open to various sad interpretations - I like it :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:34:00 PM
    wow, such a powerful monoku, Constance. Happy Thanksgiving for tomorrow xx

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am starting to read what looks to be some exceptional writing this morning. So glad I was able to read yours Constance. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:16:00 PM
    This is a wonderful entry into Debbie's contest! I think this poem says a whole lot in very few words, a grand display of wonderment! I really enjoyed this powerful statement, Great Work!!