Moments

Moments upon the loom of time woven Eternally imprinted 'pon the print Memories cling, never spent, now frozen Operate the loom, change design's intent Reverse the hands of time memories change Invert the negative read love's design Everlasting His perfect will's plan Slipped, falling into sin man was resigned Offer life up as a living sacrifice Follow Him away from sins' tangling lure Let love reign over heart, flee avarice Oarsman of my craft let me in thee moor Values of this life now become peace, love Eternally woven threads draw close my Dove Finis'

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/18/2013 10:51:00 AM

An amazing write, Sara. A profound concept swirling like perfume in poetry. I love it. -Mohammad

Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/25/2013 10:48:00 AM

This is so rich in expression! Each line is very striking, and you've worked beautifully till the last line and word...I enjoyed this, Sara, love you...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/24/2013 5:30:00 PM

I love it Sara so glad you finished it expertly penned Shadow x smile

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/24/2013 1:12:00 PM

I really love this poem. It was a pleasure to read.Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 10:38:00 AM

you took this to a higher level with such gentle portrayal of love's memories, sara... one for the books; love it!...:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2013 9:12:00 AM

A beautiful Sonnet Sara,,, the ending is just lovely... always ~Linda

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 AM

Yes, I do love the way you finished this lovely write my friend! You have accomplished what so few have, a perfect poem! Your words accompany such great emotion, I can picture myself right in the midst of this piece! I also like what you have done with the words you have created by the first letters of each line, "Memories of Love" Beautiful! It fits the poem perfectly! I loved reading this write completely this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/24/2013 4:47:00 AM

Sara I love this and your thoughts here Shadow x smile (do finish it)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/23/2013 10:07:00 PM

I really enjoyed this write my friend! I can't wait to see the finished version! You could have the 4th line of the 3rd stanza end with "endure" you could try something with that last word if you'd like, just a thought that's all! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!