Moments

I have traveled 
my whole life 
to be this far from you
 
Moments 
have passed by 
like the miles 
that lie between us
 
The wind 
has carried you 
my nameless name

 © Christine A Kysely All Rights Reserved
 (November 4, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin USA)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/28/2019 3:37:00 AM
This is heartfelt, and reminds me of people in the service and how they must often feel.
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:13:00 PM
What a thought provoking write.
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Date: 10/13/2014 8:02:00 PM
The wind is in game with the nameless name.Sad.
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Date: 8/21/2014 6:33:00 PM
it strikes me sad.. powerful write. LoveLots, Ar
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:06:00 AM
I like the way you paint it. Can relate, not to much not to little. Ty well enjoyed.
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Date: 8/17/2014 8:05:00 PM
Very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:19:00 PM
Good write!
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:21:00 PM
Moments so easily gone with the wind are impossible to recover, the sensation nameless. This is what comes through for me. Love, Dave
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Date: 8/15/2014 1:50:00 PM
"I have traveled my whole life to be this far from you" Wow. A beginning that takes ones breath away. Very good!
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