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I have traveled my whole life to be this far from you Moments have passed by like the miles that lie between us The wind has carried you my nameless name © Christine A Kysely All Rights Reserved (November 4, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin USA)

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2019 3:37:00 AM

This is heartfelt, and reminds me of people in the service and how they must often feel.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/31/2014 6:13:00 PM

What a thought provoking write.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/13/2014 8:02:00 PM

The wind is in game with the nameless name.Sad.

Ara Belle

Date: 8/21/2014 6:33:00 PM

it strikes me sad.. powerful write. LoveLots, Ar

Jeremy Branston

Date: 8/19/2014 11:06:00 AM

I like the way you paint it. Can relate, not to much not to little. Ty well enjoyed.

Michael Ellis

Date: 8/17/2014 8:05:00 PM

Very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing

Ayesha Karim

Date: 8/16/2014 2:19:00 PM

Good write!

Daver Austin

Date: 8/16/2014 1:21:00 PM

Moments so easily gone with the wind are impossible to recover, the sensation nameless. This is what comes through for me. Love, Dave

Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen

Date: 8/15/2014 1:50:00 PM

"I have traveled my whole life to be this far from you" Wow. A beginning that takes ones breath away. Very good!