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moment of exhilarating taste

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moment of exhilarating taste

I took one hit and then a few puffs more
I'm waiting for the rush, I'm waiting to explore
Into my mind of eternal bliss
the moment, it stands but does not exist 
I think about that moment and hold it dear
I know it wont last and it slowly dissapears

I take a shack more to get lost in the moment
I look back, close my eyes and seize the moment

the smoke fades but leaves the smell of a exhilarating taste
I clear my mind once more
now it's not eternal but everlasting, taking me in, once more.

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:50:00 AM
    - Very well written, Elizabeth ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:42:00 PM
    more than once wirte-up.