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Mokista springs, Aitoloakarnania

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Mokista springs, Aitoloakarnania

Gurgling serenade
tirelessly sung by the water
to the plane trees.
Gurgling serenade.
My soul has become a note
in  that Divine song.

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  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:51:00 PM
    Do you mean "plain" trees in this one. I am not sure what plane trees might be, but I am guessing you mean simple trees, right? I really like how you continued your thought into the second one, becoming one with the water's song. I see this won a contest. A very belated congrats to you.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Enjoyed both of these verses...I can hear the gurgling of a stream and can easily become a part of it.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 9:04:00 AM
    Yes of course you amy post this in your blog ;) [soft thick moss/covers the fallen trunk --drizzle falls] above I will try to assist making the verses more haiku-like..[do not use personification ;)]think subject/action - surprise, as you begin to learn the form[a gurgling brook/flows through the green woodlands -- waterbugs leap] speaking of soul is best left for another form, soul is subjective and not objective BUT let's try and get the geist of your content into a haiku like form

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    [my heart beats/to the water's rhythm- bird song] this would show man joined with nature
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 3:44:00 AM
    Beautiful writing! Fresh as the waters of the Spring. Thank you Mr. Comporozos for your comment on my poem 'TIME'. Yes, by all means you may present my poem on your blog, provided you make the autor of the poem known to your readers with (C). Are you from Aitolokarnania? I AM! Hope to hear from you again.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:23:00 AM
    A marvelous verse to the songs of nature. I could almost hear the waters gurgling. This is a very heavenly piece. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very very much, Laura, for your words!
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Great haiku,Vassilis.Take Care,Arild

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Arild!
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Hi Vassilis thanks for your comment earlier, this is a great haiku my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Lovely Haiku - well done. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 10/23/2012 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise!