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Miss Spanish Moss Maiden

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Miss Spanish Moss Maiden

Cascading ebony curls,
weave her lean oak body,
Gothic vines scatter mustard buds,
clothing her Sultan figure,
Fingers  and appendages tangle in this mesh,
Droop against her sleekness,
Attemp to shun day`s life.
Underneath, bats perch dormant,
Spiders playfully weave,
Snakes await lunch,
Hypnotic Miss Spanish Moss Maiden.

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  1. Date: 5/23/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Beautiful write with great imagery here, Robin. Been awhile since you've posted at the Soup!! Hope you return soon with more of You ... smile ...

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 11:44:00 AM
    love the image-- so God like fantastic write

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 6:25:00 AM
    Descriptive poem! Vince

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:10:00 AM
    well written. interesting words in your writing... Hugs and smiles!

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 7:08:00 PM
    wonderful imagery. this is so impressive. nice job

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 11:20:00 AM
    Hi Robin Wow this is really full of deep sentiments. Since a chick a dee I've always had a fear of spiders. Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:54:00 AM
    Ahh, taking on the imanative visionary of a plants daily life; of a perscriptve perhaps give!? And turning into your masterful thoughts, expressions and well written words....and doing so within such an imagery and wonderful way I would say dear Robin!? Wonderful write of creativity I would say! Excellent job!:)

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 5:10:00 PM
    This is just so lovely in images. That opening line really pulls you into the write. I like the line "fingers nd appendages tangle in this mesh" great stuff! Love Christie

  1. Date: 3/21/2009 2:25:00 AM
    A beautiful picture here...but I'm with Sharon, bats, spiders, snakes...I'll watch from afar! lol love, Kristin

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 7:12:00 PM
    I like your version of Spanish moss I just wrote one about the same subject the other day. Very descriptive indeed! Great use of imagery! Laura

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 3:59:00 PM
    I read most of your poems and you have such a great way of pulling them together at the very end... I think it is the hardest thing to do.

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 3:26:00 PM
    Laura recently write a poem about Spanish Moss and I looked it up and saw pics of it for the very first time. It is indeed hypnotic and beautiful in such a rare way. Spiders and bats huh, well, nice to look at from afar. Awesome write. Love, shar

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 10:04:00 AM
    This is brilliant writing my friend..I just love this entire piece that speaks loudly..cascading ebony curls..long aok body..beautiful way of painting this..her vines really brough this life..well done.