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Mirror Image

Lines carved on ageing face Skin starved of youthful grace

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Raj Nandy

Date: 7/26/2010 10:03:00 PM

Sharon , very well expressed ! The mirror never lies , like a true sage it upholds , reveals and passes by ! -Raj

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2010 7:15:00 AM

sad yes...I see the same in my mirror...fret! Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest. I enjoyed your lines. By the way, aging with grace is a possibility! Even with wrinkles...my grandmother taught me that one...by example! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations Sharon on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/5/2010 1:30:00 PM

How true. congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:15:00 PM

INteresting way of saying it, Sharon. Congratulations on your FINE win!! Luv, Andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/5/2010 12:48:00 PM

...and do not go to a drugstore and...accidentally look into those 10X magnifying mirrors !!! I had a shock! :) Congrats, love, iolanda

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:27:00 AM

Yes! I see it when I look in the mirror. Great couplet, Sharon. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/5/2010 5:22:00 AM

nice entry for the competition, feels like there a bigger poem here which remains unwritten. Nicely done

John Freeman

Date: 7/4/2010 5:33:00 PM

Sad, but inner beauty is apparent. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Date: 7/4/2010 11:27:00 AM

Got those lines coming. Guess one just has to wear them proudly. Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 10:43:00 AM

Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this remarkable write and win ..so enjoy as u celebrate your holiday weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ..AlohA..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/3/2010 8:45:00 PM

sad to age but at least it is living!!

James Fraser

Date: 7/3/2010 1:46:00 PM

Clever Couplet Sharon, and so true. Good luck in the contest >> James