Mind's Brittle Jars

Closed jars of crystal mind nesting our emotions butterflies of many colours colours of joy,sorrow,love,hate and more those jars are more fragile than glass handle them with much care if once broken it's gone! Date:24th January,2012
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:22:00 AM
jashi.. thanks for coming around as i always look forward to your comments... re " adolescent stems, i am thinking of entering this for debbie's transformation gig.. you thnk??:) huggs!
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:36:00 AM
are you there??.. come visit and spin a new one, kashi buddy!..:) huggs
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:21:00 AM
If once broken, it's gone.. nothing to replace it! great thought, Kash. :)
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:03:00 PM
I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Kash. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:18:00 PM
wonderful! but i work to achieve that goal though, breaking jars! ^.~
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:18:00 PM
Hello again, still waiting for your next poem!!
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Date: 1/26/2012 8:51:00 AM
you gotta give my kashi-poetic dose today or i can;t SLEEEP!... got more??.. congrats on your wins and thanks for your concern, buddy... :) huggs
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:15:00 PM
That is very good and so true- bless you, bren: )
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:06:00 PM
Hey, kash, you must have gone offline. Anyway, I"m outta here for the rest of the night now. I need to work on a love senryu! SEe ya!
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:23:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 1:24:00 AM
Very descriptive rictameter Kash. I don't want those jars to get broken either.
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:39:00 PM
VERY nice imagery and analogy to life. Susan was wanting a metaphorical poem and YOU delivered my friend. Good night now. I think I will not post a poem tonight. I won't even have time for comments anyway.(well, maybe late tomorrow.)
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:45:00 PM
this dazzles me, kashi.. another jewel of a remarkable piece with that soft appeal to it.. winning is surefire! :) huggs!.. SOUP MAIL!
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:46:00 PM
How fragile is the mind? Now I have an idea! Love it!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:37:00 PM
Great write!...So much tho't into this one, Kash. It is wonderful..and yes the mind should be handled with much care. This is why kindness needs to be more valued... Ps..I see you didn't like my newest poem...it is a new form called REVERSE TANKA!!...ha ha..I can't believe I did that..You had me laughing with that note..thanks for pointing out that I can not count to 7 or 5 with lil sleep! YOu are STILL THE EDITOR!! Gwendolen
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