Mind

I probe the globe implode explode I smell the fear death's knell is near! We live to sing all hail the King!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 11:31:00 AM

Fun footles

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/5/2009 10:56:00 AM

Wonderful writing it was a joy to read. I wish you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2009 2:11:00 PM

Nicely done. Short be inviting. On the left hand side of the page is place that says Resources. Under that heading you will find Poetry Terminology and Forms of Poetry. Click on them and you can learn much about writing. This is in answer to your question on one of my poems on which you commented and thank you for the comment. Also, when you read a person's poem you can click on what they say that it is and go there and look at that explanation of that kind of poetry. Keep writing. Sara

Joan Akpurhie

Date: 11/4/2009 1:59:00 PM

hey ur peom was shor but very cool i luv it