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Mighty Old Warrior

Pain, instilled within Goes into a state of numbness… Mighty old warrior
• The ice cube sent me into pain at first for a while then my hand went numb from the extreme cold that I felt…then the water was dripping from the cracks of my fingers. And this continued until the ice cube melted. A little pain came back to my hand while I was waiting for the numbness to subside. But I couldn’t represent this within my Haiku. I enjoyed this hands on contest. It was unique and fun. Russell Sivey Contest: ICE KING (in less than 10 lines) For the adventures one. Sponsor: SKAT - OZ 7/19/2013

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 11:39:00 AM
    Great work that you penned for the contest..Enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:50:00 PM
    very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Clever take Russell, really enjoyed!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Hello Russell, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:23:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Russell! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:07:00 PM
    HELLO RUSSELL, A DELIGHTFUL WIN... YOUR POEM WOULD HAVE BEEN PLACED IN SECOND,however you did not follow the title rule :-( Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 3:01:00 PM
    In a word... in a word!

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:24:00 AM
    love this, Russell - a big win here for sure

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 12:33:00 PM
    that last line was a knock-out, russell... this is a vivid, impactful picture of ice's chill in just a few words... what a gorgeous piece!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:30:00 AM
    hey you make me wanna do this now!!

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Brilliant!!!!! Much respect to you on this! I'd rather dip my hands in ice CREAM. Just sayin'.