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Mighty Clouds

Pure white as cotton in the sky, Heal our weary souls just by looking up, Spell a magic in my heart and I fly, Oh mighty clouds.....walls of heaven from atop, Amazing view as God created from above. For Barbara Gorelick's "Clouds" contest

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/19/2013 3:07:00 AM

Excellent. Nature's beauty. Lovely write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/18/2013 1:22:00 AM

beautiful maria, so visual

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2013 11:38:00 AM

very nice, Maria, and putting them as walls atop heaven!

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/17/2013 8:58:00 AM

Nice piece. The clouds are very powerful sometimes aren't they? they sometimes appear as human faces If you look closely at the sky. Consider placing three dot s (...) where you have five. That's part of the grammar rule. No more that three

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2013 7:58:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It is very descriptive and emotive..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2013 2:46:00 PM

truly a soulful write enriched by your lovely words, paz... greeat job..:) hugggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2013 10:48:00 AM

- A magic and lovely poem, Maria. - Love it !!! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)