Midnight In Paris

She was the hidden flower of the seine
She walked her sadness through the streets
The sky was grey, the wind made her shiver
She cried for her mother, to hold her pain

Her heart was torn
All her friends had left
Alone in Paris, like an empty bottle of wine
Her desires drained, every solitary drop

If, only if, a smile would appear
She laughed, she cried, all the same
The tears hidden inside
She rode the subways to emptiness

If, only if, she could be a painting
The museum walls could hang her thoughts
And drown the grey clouds hanging above
If, only if, her heart could beat once more

If, only if, the life could give peace
And sleep would become a blanket of warmth
Float away, she dreamed, 
Broken hotels and empty windows

If Maman I could hug you once more
Before the Eiffel tour fades from view
My Paris is leaving me
As I leave you


Epilogue

The Cemetery of Thoughts

There’s beauty in sadness
There is sadness that we don’t see
The lonely
Who need to see
The beauty of Paris
Kiss the lonely
And wake up broken hearts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/19/2016 4:33:00 PM
C'est poème est fantastique. My poor French still good for a short reply. :D
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/24/2013 12:17:00 AM
very nice words up there ;}
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/19/2016 6:16:00 PM
Somehow I missed this comment, so a very belated thank you!! :)
Date: 5/26/2013 7:51:00 PM
France Gall - 1993.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 10:37:00 PM
Voir mon nouveau site!
Date: 5/24/2013 8:12:00 PM
This was beautiful in a haunting melancholy way....I love those conditionals...if and only if....Life doesn't always turn out how we want, and sometimes when we are broken, we need a mother's love the most. My daughter turns to me when in pain. Lovely write. BTW...I love Paris. Been there and fell in love with Sacre Coeur. Had one of my most profound spiritual moments inside there. I see you've posted a link. I will try to get to that. :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thanks Elieen! See like a typical man I am always behind in responding!!! Hugs!!!
Date: 5/21/2013 11:03:00 PM
oh I SO love Paris. Is this for unbearable beauty contest??? It's very lovely.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/22/2013 10:46:00 AM
No, It was inspired by this song, Si maman si - Marie-Pier Perreault https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tUQO87ioYg
Date: 5/21/2013 9:28:00 PM
Well done my friend, really enjoyed this one ....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 10:39:00 PM
Merci, thank you! Its also on my new site!
Date: 5/21/2013 8:56:00 PM
A brilliant composition my friend! Marvelous phrasing, steeped in emotion, and superb imagery.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/21/2013 9:00:00 PM
Thanks Keith, glad you liked it
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