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Midnight Brain Storm

At night I stay awake, I shake with my eyes closed I ponder past and present  Solving every problem posed My mind is full of lightning Its raining on my lawn Pros and cons collide Waves break against my door Each night I tell a story Then forget it in the morning But the stars fall from my ceiling  Bleeding light inside my being Forever never seems to last  As long you might like it Should have written my thoughts in a diary Instead of the inside of my eyelids

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Rory. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/1/2012 5:32:00 PM
What an interesting, profound poem. I enjoyed reading today. Thanks for the comment on my poem and I hope you have a marvelous New Year. Always, Laura
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