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Midnight Brain Storm

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Midnight Brain Storm

At night I stay awake,
I shake with my eyes closed
I ponder past and present 
Solving every problem posed

My mind is full of lightning
Its raining on my lawn
Pros and cons collide
Waves break against my door

Each night I tell a story
Then forget it in the morning
But the stars fall from my ceiling 
Bleeding light inside my being

Forever never seems to last 
As long you might like it
Should have written my thoughts in a diary
Instead of the inside of my eyelids

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 7:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Rory. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 5:32:00 PM
    What an interesting, profound poem. I enjoyed reading today. Thanks for the comment on my poem and I hope you have a marvelous New Year. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 5:01:00 PM
    I like this Rory, I hope you have more up your sleeve, looking forward to reading your work. love,vie

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    Date: 1/1/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vie. Ill get to work