Midday Nap

At stark midday The guava tree's swishing leaves Rustles my sleep ----------------------------- - So I opened my soup and read a few poetry. It eased my mind back into warmth. And now I'm tired again, and more equipped to take on mid day dreams. Salute to everyone here.... I'm glad to have found this amazing site!

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/14/2008 5:28:00 AM

It is a great site isn't it? Love the picture of the guava trees leaves. Excellent flow and lovely read. Michael

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/1/2008 1:40:00 PM

This is a very cool and breezy poem. It's the first haiku I've actually enjoyed.

Date: 9/28/2008 10:27:00 AM

Nice use of imagery. I like the way you use sound in this poem. Thank you for contributing you creativity to "Tidbits." This is the first time I've tried something like this. I am excited how it is growing, a tribute to so many talented writers at Poetry Soup. I'm glad to hear you feel that way too. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/28/2008 5:21:00 AM

Such lovely, peaceful mood and imagery you have captured. Welcome to the soup. Love, Shar

James Foulk

Date: 9/24/2008 8:24:00 PM

yes George welcome to soup this was a great write enjoyed .keep posting my friend.

Adell Foster

Date: 9/24/2008 6:10:00 AM

Welcome to the soup George, this is a very good write and one can definitely identify with your comments as well. Thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Deneen White

Date: 9/23/2008 5:10:00 PM

I hate being woken up form my slumber of sleep, I love my sleep, nice write, and thank you for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/21/2008 8:17:00 AM

Welcome to the soup, may you spend many happy hours here. Love the last line, very well written. Regards Heidie

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/20/2008 5:46:00 AM

And we are blessed to have you here George - God Bless

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/19/2008 11:48:00 PM

I second your post script about this amazing site, George! This poem is peaceful, and thank you for your comments on my poem also.