Mickey Mouse

Legendary star Mickey Mouse Lives with his pals in a clubhouse! Say he lost his journal filled with doodles. All he has to do is scream “Oh Toodles!”

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Len Gasun

Date: 12/15/2012 8:41:00 AM

This is really great! i love it! My hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear Jacob! love/hugs, Leonora

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/15/2012 12:52:00 AM

Cute poem Jacob! :D you are really talented and I enjoyed my reading, congrats on your win :D, wishing you a great happy holiday :D - Hug, Yanny

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2012 11:52:00 PM

i googled it and in fact, he yelled toodles. this is wonderful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2012 11:51:00 PM

this is something I was not familiar with. He screamed "oh toodles?" CUTE one Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2012 8:33:00 PM

Jacob , Congratulations with your awesome Clerihew ;-) always & forever ~PD

Michael Hilario

Date: 11/27/2012 5:01:00 AM

It reminds me of my kids hehehe! The time we watch Mickey is one of my happy thought!

Gail Debole

Date: 11/26/2012 11:59:00 AM

This is definitely alright! Good poem!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2012 2:56:00 PM

Jacob...lol...love this...wish I had my own club house....thank you for the. Smile...Linda

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/24/2012 8:36:00 AM

You honour my greatest hero... Mickey and I go way way back! LOL Love this little Disneyesque scene!

Jacob Cra

Date: 11/23/2012 4:24:00 PM

I know it's not that great, but I'm really proud of it because it's my first clerihew ever!!! :) Sure, it took me only... like... 2 minutes to write, but still it is alright.