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Metaphoric Whirlwind

I am offended by your metaphors, they're vindictive the way they dangle themselves above my heartstrings, periodically plucking when one gets tangled in the wind they just hang there like an untame pennon waiting to flap for blatant recognition my, how you crave those squalls with such ravenous gluttony, gnawing at the pellucid air as though it were chewable

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/28/2008 11:56:00 AM
Powerful words forward your thoughts in this poem. Nice use of similie. Much to think about here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/28/2008 8:33:00 AM
This seems to have a directness to it, as if it is intended for one in particular. Terrific vocabulary exhibited and a smooth flow that uses clear imagery to make the point. Very well expressed. Michael
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