Metals

All gold glitters lies Diamonds graciously greedy Silver is most pure

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Bill Doggett

Date: 7/27/2009 3:05:00 PM

Interesting haiku, If you don' mind quite metalic. Great poem Billt

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/22/2009 8:07:00 PM

enjoyed this fine haiku! Ciara! jimbo

James Fraser

Date: 7/22/2009 11:16:00 AM

Kool Haiku Ciara>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2009 4:35:00 AM

Ciara, Fantastic Haiku. Keep the poems coming. We will read. Love, Carol

Date: 7/21/2009 4:16:00 PM

Interesting thought for the reader to ponder about. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes wishes with your writing. Karen

James Knox

Date: 7/21/2009 1:18:00 PM

very nice ciara :)

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/20/2009 11:55:00 PM

Stones, beautiful stones, Awesome write.... Well written Haiku.....:JP)