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Message in the bottle

   An explode in time when mine mind did move through mine digits not mine lips

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:29:00 AM
    I remember those digits :)

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 4:09:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this today James..)

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 9:30:00 AM
    quizzical and yet mind blowing, james... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Good one..If we could all type it out before we exploded, this might be a better world in which to live..Enjoyed reading ..I redid my entry into Joe Maverick's contest..You might want to recheck what I changed it to..Sara

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Just reading comments below since I am not sure what you meant here. I got a kick out of what Daver had to say!!

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:11:00 PM
    aw lovley work, thanks for your kind comments, my daughter wasvery brave and is going to fracture clinic tomorrw for an x ray to check the bone, Gos has everything in his hand. God bless you from diane and thanks

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 9:24:00 AM
    just think of the sensation! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 9:10:00 AM
    This is too deep for me, Sir James. Mine digits have only allowed me to count to 10. Mine mind was in time lost completely. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 10:02:00 PM
    James, this is a great monoku... thank you for sharing... good night..pd

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:32:00 PM
    I can go to many different places with this monoku, James! And that's great! Good one. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:36:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your monoku...thanks for sharing..INK-U-SCRIPT