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Message in a Bottle - Here - John

Our excursion brushed past bashing tides.
An uncharted desert shelter
is where the vessel resides.
Stripped of rhyme and reason;
I behold demons
strumming spiked lyres
yielding me

Copyright © John Heck

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  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:14:00 PM
    What a message John! I truly love your nonet! I am also grateful for the honorable mention in your contest. It made me smile :-)

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 5:00:00 PM
    ooooo, I love this John...very nice Nonet! wonderful thoughts--wonderfully deep...:) love ya, deb

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:04:00 AM
    Sent you a Soup mail, John. I hadn't posted the poem. After reading your blog, I thought you were looking for poems about main courses, not candy. I just posted it now, so your contest has closed. Just wanted to be helpful, not expecting to win. Have fun with the contest judging. I'm not big on writing about food. Been having health problems and am on a strict diet now. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 10:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well deserved win John. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 8:47:00 AM
    Congrats John on your big win in the contest of Linda!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:13:00 PM
    Hey John Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest. Very well written as all your poems are. You have the magic touch. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 10:41:00 AM
    Hello John, Congratulations on your first place in the contest. Well done, I like this one very much As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:45:00 AM
    What a very different take on the challenge, John, with very engaging lines too :) Super congrats on the awesome 2nd place win and Thank you as well for my HM in your contest :) I am really happy to be in your list-- thanks :D

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 6:58:00 AM
    Heya John, I already mentioned how much I enjoyed your nonet, and was expecting it to place in the top, so congratulations! And thank you again for my 1st place in your last contest, this really brightened my day when I saw the winner's list!~Chris

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 3:26:00 AM
    Hey there John, congratulations to you on your win in the contest and with your poems being selected for the soup contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 9:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, John. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:41:00 PM
    what a fantastical little tale this challenge inspired from you, john. a big congratulations on your awesome win, and also on getting three poems into the soup contest! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:16:00 PM
    congratulations on your second place win with this beautiful worded nonet...wonderfully penned ,,and I want to thank you for all your visits and for the comments that you have left behind,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 5:25:00 PM
    So great to see you at the top in this one John. Congratulations on your worthy second place honored poem. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 3:38:00 PM
    rise and shine, john! congrats with amiles to yuo.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 3:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your very fine and deserving win in Linda's Contest, John. Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 2:56:00 PM
    Nice Nonet! I appreciate your appreciation for my poem, and it's resultant high placing in your contest...I got that thing in in the nick of time apprarently! Thanks again...(also check soupmail)

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 2:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, John

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 12:07:00 PM
    Congrats John on your success in my contest .. excellent message.. thankxx for your support..

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:34:00 AM
    Great write John with wonderful imagery. Love it... Lay