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Message In a Bottle

Poison pulsed through the veins of the earth. Pumped by the *****sapien sapiens. A wretched species charmed by the pleasures of evil. With a gluttonous hunger for destruction. In the human`s prime. War was a natural tune to be danced to. The omnipresent disco blast of a bomb. A rhythm of hate. Seas rose, devouring those below level. Forests vanished leaving the world breathless. Oceans turned into graveyards. The mass murderer called Oil spill. Beautiful rhino and elephant insecure on an earth they called home too. Pursued for their precious ivory. Africa lost her Big 5 India her tiger China her panda. To entertain a fickle kind- man. Sadly... I was human too.

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Date: 1/14/2017 11:07:00 AM
I feel Mother Nature's pain through your words.
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Date: 9/5/2013 11:59:00 AM
Excellent poem! It is very sad what we are doing to our environment - the wanton slaughter of animals on land and sea to satisfy the gluttony of man! This is an excellent "theme poem" for the World Wide Fund for Nature whose stated mission is to halt and reverse the destruction of our environment. I like the connotation of the title and the scenario surrounding it. Mankind seems to be on a path towards his own destruction. Can it be reversed? That is the question! Congratulations on your poem!
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:30:00 AM
It is good to see poets with a social conscience.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2013 6:32:00 AM
If you have a chance read my poem Bengal, I think you might appreciate it. Thanks for your visit earlier.

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