Mercurys Dream

Falling riffs like spangled gold,
And sounding drums seem to explode
A surge of tapping, dancing feet,
The piano’s notes, mon coeur entreat.
Cherie amour the air is ''sweet'', so silver laced,
Each face reflects another’s shine
As endeavours fruit is taken in
Like fragrant mellow wine.


© Joe Maverick 03-08-2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/7/2017 3:48:00 AM
Very very nice :)
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Date: 4/25/2012 9:28:00 PM
Hello, Joe.. thank you very much for honoring my poem... it really made my day... How are you?? how have you been.. really I at times like this I miss you, and your inspiring friendship..I'll never forget the time you mailed me and told me how i encouraged you one time when you where feeling down.. well i'm the one feeling down now.. and your comments mean much to me.. always..pd
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Date: 4/22/2012 8:13:00 AM
Bon, Monsieur...vous etes comme Arc de Triomphe vers la poesie.:) Another wonder written by Joe Maverick, cheers to you! Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 3/29/2011 3:59:00 AM
Wow! What a colorful picture you paint, Joe with this sensational piece. Many congrats on this fine feature of the week. Elaine
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Date: 3/28/2011 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, thanks for sharing with us, Joe
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Date: 3/28/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 3/12/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congrtas Joe. thanks for ur comments abt my poem. your right, we are indeed subjected to one god, i wont take it as curse or in negative way,mab be m blessed with special quality not all are intutive.. thanx. good luck. pooja mitter
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Joe. Love Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Joe. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 1:35:00 PM
I like the dance in this one - full of image and flavor. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 1/10/2011 11:59:00 AM
A great choice by this site for poems of the week. This has great descriptiveness and suitable rhyming. Overall, a fine presentation.
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Date: 1/9/2011 11:31:00 PM
This is so pretty and flowing, Joe. I really like this one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:25:00 PM
this was a beautiful piece. congratulations on your feature this week. --Madison
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv my friend...
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for your commets on my works...keep sharing with us here.
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Date: 8/6/2010 2:09:00 PM
poem is exceptionally flowing like your mellow wine. Enjoyed!
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