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Memory As Weeping Willow

"Memory as Weeping Willow" tears tumble upon ashen face cascading as icicles on a frosty Winter's day frozen in motion from grieving emotion broken pieces scattering of a shattered heart as ornamental glass granulates sorrow surrounds a torn life as a maze of withered grass thirsting for droplets of rain to quench and soothe as an umbrella of comfort ... a tiny white casket fragile as a rainbow lowered beneath moist soil as a garden of love to nourishe the sad ground laid to repose in immortal tomb in blue velvet frock embracing a new baby angel as God enfolds His own creation as a precious gem ... as still ocean waters kiss like lovers on a sandy shore with caressing entwined as tree branches at first sign of Spring withered dreams fade into the earthly dust as a parched desert wallowing in ashes as a Mother grieves, sobbing for a lost child as a womb unable to yield fruit ... life has ended for two souls as a sinner refuses to forgive as a breath, stifled, a marked grave in remembrance with a cross asking "Why"? an answer, unspoken, as a silent interlude of prayer seeks to understand this tragic death quiet thoughts as a dagger thrust ... ... a haunting memory as weeping willow ... *For Catie Lindsey's Contest Metaphorically Speaking

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Date: 3/13/2014 2:31:00 AM
love the title....~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:13:00 AM
At wishing you good luck because it's really a heart touching poem. Thanks for your comments. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:55:00 AM
This wonderful, Sweetheart, the poem contains all of the emotions, one has come to regard as your very own, you are so sincere, i'm sure so many of us here, would love to meet the Sweetheart of Soup.........
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:44:00 AM
what can i say just wonderful ,i hope your keeping well my dear love duncan,ceizar xxx
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:40:00 AM
this was beautiful my buddy ol pal.. I loved how you tied weeping willows into this poem.. good luck in the contest.. hope all is well.. smile cory
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:59:00 PM
wow, you did an incredible job with this heartfelt poem, LInda. I am so rushed here I do not even have the time to check out this contest. I have to go offline now and can't see more poems. Hope to see you soon, sweetie.
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Date: 9/9/2012 12:50:00 PM
This is a highly heartfelt write my friend! I am sorry you went through this terrible hardship in life, your losing a child, that is truly a horrible event! All we can do here is be your friend and be here as fellow poets whenever you need us! And I am here for you! This poem is a truly sad write, but brilliantly written, very nicely done! I love this piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/9/2012 11:39:00 AM
Emotional piece from a gifted talented heart. Love your way from a absent n busy NY poet. Giants made me sad. Lol. Hope your well and hoping we can chat soon. Love n hugs Michael.
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Date: 9/9/2012 10:09:00 AM
my, sweets!... my heart pounds as i read this compelling piece with words filled with pathos!... so gracefully rendered despite or because of the wrenching images... on to the winners' list... you better now?.. :)huggs!
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:32:00 AM
heartfelt and heartbreaking write, my friend - this beautiful and sad poem is sure to be a big, big winner
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Date: 9/9/2012 2:01:00 AM
the death of a child leaves many scars and many unanswered questions too ,, with luv ,,
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