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Memories Thorns

Picked before you bloomed 
your loss brings me to my knees 
playbacks run too long 
remembrances felt so strong... 
slipping now into my dreams

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:25:00 PM
    I think our world is not the place, just a learning curve, leaves a bad taste, and handicaps occur, and we are born to face, the unknown lesson there, till bad karma we erase, sow to reap for your mistake, old religions do concur, hard life is no mistake, until heaven does demur...

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:55:00 AM
    So poignant in such few lines, Debra! A masterpiece! Congrats to the winner, happy you, if it's your first tanka. I love this marvellous form but I can't get to it, somehow, how hard I try. I'll take the courage from you! :) Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:07:00 PM
    Similar curcumstances.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on your superb win,Debra..I love this...

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:57:00 PM
    I love that last line to this. Glad to see your poem now while going thru the winners list. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 12:03:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Debra. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:38:00 AM
    congrats on your win! love this!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:55:00 AM
    congrats on your win...nicely done

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:42:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Debra, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Great poems....

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:56:00 AM
    What!! this is your first...? it is one of the best i ever seen, the theme gets one thinking, then that juxatose wow, Debra, if this goes into a contest, be prepared to be the winner...

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:57:00 PM
    My first Tanka :)

    johnson Avatar robert johnson
    Date: 10/15/2012 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My first your welcome. Come on, who hasn't wanted to do that silly thing. :) Oh, and my last. :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:59:00 PM
    Cosmos calling out my name to come and fan eternal flame. Angelic choir sounds so sweet. All dressed in white at our lords feet. Ethereal clouds of slumbers flight. Instill serenity tonight.

    johnson Avatar robert johnson
    Date: 10/15/2012 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If it is lovely, it's because. I am inspired by the poet that the comment is for. Thanks for the inspiration and the compliment. :)
    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is quite lovely Robert...make sure you post it !!!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:37:00 PM
    A gorgeous little poem, which says a lot - Well done Debra. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)