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Memories Lost

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Memories Lost

Memories Lost

past entangled snares
heavy laden under mire
lurk memories lost

deeply seeded held
cleverly hidden in mist
are memories lost

heaving  hoeing
ebbing flowing never showing
all memories lost

~deborah burch©

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  1. Date: 6/5/2012 4:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in PD`s contest...Great piece.......XOX...

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Great write Deborah...congrats!!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 2:40:00 AM
    Cap'n Deb congrats on your win, love it..David

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 12:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/4/2012 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you soooo much deat Elliott!! i still cannot comment on blogs but i'm reading them...just listened tothe teamsters' anthem on are very gifted (as is sweet Vie)..and i listened to your dream as well!!:-) AWSOMENESS!!! Well Done!! love ya, deb
  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Yes, I checked below and I just knew I had seen this before. Congrats to you in the contest. I love nostalgic writes.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/4/2012 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:18:00 PM
    DEB, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/4/2012 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you PD
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:39:00 AM
    ahoy Captain, we are ebbing and flowing here very nicely, not into the heaving though he he he...David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/4/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol...thank you David, love ya, cap'n deb
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:15:00 PM
    All very true Great write. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:50:00 PM
    hi, Deb. I enjoyed the message here. especially like the ebbing flowing never showing part.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Very nice Deb,Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:25:00 AM
    i see here a great theme put together by descriptive words and images in a very pleasing way, deborah... touche!..;) huggs

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 11:32:00 PM
    You are becoming the haiku queen here....I wanna read a few more of yours this morning....

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:09:00 PM
    T do like the Haiku form very much Deborah and i liked yours today , thank you for sharing , best wishes , Declan xx

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Deborah, you'll never guess now I'm having that error on my page.. i have opened this poem,, over a dozen times... lol..I have your last haiku memorized already.. Don't get me wrong.. having lost memories is a sad thought.. all i can think of are deep thoughts.. nice trio of haikus.. .. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:44:00 PM
    This is a outstanding write my friend! I love how you made each memories lost a little different. My favorite line is definitely the line, "ebbing flowing never showing" displaying the absence of memories. I love your poem immensely Debbie! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:44:00 PM
    I like the flow and clever connections shown in oyur haiku.