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Melancoly

melancoly sombre sits, round my concious half of wit, but then im not awake, tom tit,(finch) and cold consumes the night, i think you got it write, when im awake a bit, id now admit, a poetry delight, of: ' Alone Again' Terry O'Leary Don

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Date: 9/21/2012 5:32:00 PM
Talented powerful write as always my friend
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:23:00 AM
Hi Don, nice poets and words of delight.. a powerful mood... always~ pd
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Date: 9/15/2012 7:49:00 PM
Hmmm Don... it seems that sometimes my 'few words' inspires you to very poetic flights... I'm happy to be of use... I also like your poem (though I hope you're not really (too) melancholy...)... Terry (thanks for your very creative response!)
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Date: 9/15/2012 7:12:00 PM
Quite the interesting write my friend, a fascinating piece, very enlightening! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly fine poem this evening! You've done excellently with this write, a well put together poem! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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