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~*~ has it been twelve years, since you went far away, it feels like yesterday, mother dear . . . I miss you so much, your laughter and your smile, mom, you were my best friend, in this world . . . how can I forget, your last day on this earth, when you whispered to me, I love you . . . . and I realize the incredible gift, I was given that day, whispered words . . . how many can say, they heard those words of love whispered in the last breathe, before death . . . ~*~ Melancholy Form (created by Constance) Syllable Count 5/6/6/3 x 5 stanza's Theme , recalling a sadness (originally posted as - whispered words, March/2013)

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  1. Date: 5/17/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Expressively penned. It's truly a flow from the bottom of your heart. I know your mom must be proud of you during her sojourn here. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:26:00 PM
    love this moving write and your great new form, my friend

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Constance, I do believe that only you could do this form this well. It's your invention, right? I hope to try it. I just could not come up with anything for your last contest, but I really love the "feel" of your title Melancholy Memory and the feel of this poetry form. thanks for the example!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 3:44:00 PM
    I remembered when I read this wonderful write the first time back in March! This was such a tremendous poem then and is still a glorious piece my friend! I truly loved reading this magnificent poem this afternoon, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:12:00 AM
    A new form...... a wonderful challenge you have given us again, Constance! This beautiful and touching poem is a perfect example........and Melancholy is the right description of both the poem and form. I'll give it a try. In the meantime......I am very grateful for the honor in your Memories at the Door Contest placement......thank you so much! :) So nice to see you posting more each day!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Please check out my next contest, called Melancholy Memory, theme is recalling a sadness, 35 entries, the form to be used is Melancholy created by me as described above.