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Me Verses Me

Who is that staring back at me
Go away on the count of three
Do I know who you are
Can I wish upon a star
Questions of who I should be

Not just demons do I fight
Thoughts drift easily through the night
Myself against me 
Trying to break free
To do what I know is right

Written by: Shannon Deane
Written:  June 28th, 2011
Contest:  Myself Against Me

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  1. Date: 11/19/2011 1:45:00 PM
    no that bugger isnt me, must have snuck in 4 breakfast see, begone willy wagtail thee, or i am not amused...willy... still love it...

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 3:06:00 PM
    Love these double limericks, Shannon. Sometimes we are our own worst enemy. I like how you order yourself to go away on the count of 3. I boss myself around all the time too. ha ha. Gwenodlen

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 2:05:00 PM
    * “This Must Be Fictions Moment * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * Because All My Eyes Can See * Whenever I Gaze Beyound These Burgundy Curtains & Into The Priceless Beauty of You * Is Exactly That * Tender & Sweet Strawberries & Creams, Delicious Beauty * Reaching Into The Deepest of My Heart & Soul * As for Perhaps Following? * No, I Would Much Rather Walk By Your Heavenly Side * To Gather Your Fragrance As A Perfect Bouquet * Red Red Roses * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 3:26:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 10:02:00 AM
    powerful lines of intense emotion Shannon.. perfectly penned to share with all who struggle with the inner self.. we all do at one time or another.. thankxx for sharing this piece luv..

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 7:21:00 PM
    many personalitys see, from the mirror which is me, shut up ya fool i cant be three, so who's in charge, whattya mean ye !#$%

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 2:03:00 PM
    this is a prayer lyrics ... LOL.. kidding.. berries and demons that is what I call myself...I truly enjoyed

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:26:00 AM
    this was so good. nicely written cory

  1. Date: 7/8/2011 6:46:00 AM
    Fine Limerick Shannon, I can relate to your words here, totally. Good luck in the contest. < Soup Mail for you )

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 8:56:00 AM
    an honest set of Limericks Shannon expressing the raging battle luv.. we all deal with some demon that we despise luv..

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 9:40:00 PM
    I enjoyed this one. Limericks are so nice to write and to read!

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 11:31:00 AM
    This is my inner battle now..Thanks for sharing..

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 7:06:00 PM
    very cool and clever piece Shannon.. great insight into u and the inner battle.. we all have it too luv.. good luck in the contest..

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 4:12:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your work today and hope you will continue to share your works with us today.