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Matter's Illusion

Matter's eternal
Not created nor destroyed
Endlessly it is.

Molecules combined
Created life's illusion
Serving no purpose

Life makes no matter
The burden of conscious thought 
purpose ever sought

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  1. Date: 2/18/2011 2:18:00 AM
    NICE! It takes me back to my Quantum Physics classes...and I love it...a 7!

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:38:00 PM
    Thought provoking piece. Found myself reading it over and pondering. Thank you for sharing your words with us and for your kind comment. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
    Terrific Haiku series Joe, love it....:)

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 4:51:00 PM
    A wow poem , joe,, enjoyed with great image .. love the perception you share with us,.... take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 4:02:00 PM
    I am always lost in thoughts , people will say, where are you? oh, writing a poem in my head, ha ha , your hakus are deep with thoughts~~

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 5:29:00 AM
    I can tell you are a deep thinker Joe. These haiku provide a lot of inspiration for thought. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 4:03:00 AM
    Joe, we are all burdened by "conscious thought" as we try to sort through life's illusion. Indeed, matter is eternal but our thoughts seem fleeting. Well said, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 1:22:00 AM
    Nice Haikus on Matter and Life.Enjoyed--kashinath

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 10:41:00 PM
    HI, Joe, thanks for your sweet comment on my poem today. Of these, the first one is my favorite. I enjoyed the double meaning of Matter that was employed when you said Life makes no matter in the third one. NO matter about the matter! An interesting haiku string!

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 9:27:00 PM
    These are three decently written haiku. In the first line of your second entry, your word "molocules" is correctly spelled "molecules". Everything else looks fine.