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Marie Antoinette

She wore velvet and satin Pampered as the poor rebelled She lost her head, bleeding red Marie Antoinette Entry for Francine's Red Contest

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Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 8:09:00 PM

Love this, a true history lesson in poetry, doesn't get much better. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2011 6:10:00 AM

Terrific entry Diane ... a different spin on the RED aspect of the contest... historical drama luv.. good luck ... a sure chart topper ..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/1/2011 6:48:00 PM

Nice character sketch of Marie Antoinette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2011 6:11:00 PM

Boy, I am glad I came to your poetry first tonight. I had no idea Francine had another contest going on, and I better get a move on!! It seems it must be something like "make a dodoitsu using color red?" Cool internal rhyme there! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2011 6:10:00 PM

oh, so i used "alot" in a comment. hahaha. comments don't count. WE can be downright slobs when we comment. heehee. All the typos I make in comments is outrageous because my fingers are literally flying to make them and get to my next read! Have you ever read up on "confusing word pairs" of English. There are so many fun things to notice. How people use except instead of accept. Or lose instead of loose. The list goes on and on. I just love all that kind of stuff! Let me read this poem now!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 4:37:00 PM

Perfect dodoitsu form, Diane. You must have gone beyond the Soup to study this form for this write reflects a deep knowledge of it. Very cool satire! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2011 4:11:00 PM

Good one that is excellent and educational..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Sara