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fog weaves silence into the cool morning, consorting with cousin clouds as treetops sway and sigh a lone spark ignites flames that spread like bold disease while smoke-smog smothers skies that cry acid raindrops onto graves of bark and ash highways part the trees... another cigarette butt tossed out the window For Constance's "Three Verses" contest (Kimo/Tanka/Senryu)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/1/2013 10:16:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:56:00 PM
This was one of my favorites, of course!! Congratulations,Heather. I can always be sure to like a poem of yours.
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:16:00 PM
Heather congratulations on you great win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win. So true. Man can cause so much destruction with unthinking acts
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:13:00 PM
Much higher for me but we picked serious topics, fav 7 Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:55:00 PM
Gosh, what a year for fires..great poem and heartbreaking as well. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/27/2013 1:03:00 PM
How well said. The forest fires have been horrendous in places. Careless man. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/11/2013 12:59:00 AM
wow, I was thinking by the theme, that it was for Deb's contest but yes, constance has one similar and this is really good work. LOVE IT>
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:37:00 PM
I would also like to thank you for my membership into the ninja club. This is my formal acceptance. Im honored. I would like to thank Heather Ober and my drug dealer from which I get creative pills. thank you thank you...;)
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:34:00 PM
graves of bark and ash.....ain't that just the coolest thing I've heard today?...why, yes. Yes it is. We're seeing a wild fire here, eh? I almost missed it the first time around...was a little captured.
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Date: 6/5/2013 11:07:00 AM
oh my, heather... to express a soulful reflection as you have done so eloquently is a gift worthy of praise... a monumentally fantastic piece like " a lone spark ( that) ignites.." amazing!...:) huggs
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